Save yourselves from the headache of trying to interpret this story. This has the same grammar as a machine translated or Google translated Chinese novel.

If author-san reads this then just know I love this fan-fic so don't mind the stuff after this I don't know why some people are being stupid but if you don't like this novel then don't read it but others can still read it cause they are different so those 1 star review people don't go saying that they shouldn't read this cause it is a good one in my taste and mabye it is also good in their eye's so don't go saying stuff that make it look bad while it could be good for them.

Okay... For new people when they get to this fanfiction ... At first the grammar is bad but then it improves very well and you will understand the story and you will like it, you will see. The author does not advance things with women and makes romance make sense. To the one who reads this I tell him to give him an opportunity. From chapter 8 the story is fun and good. I would give you 5 stars if it were not for the grammar of the beginning haha. I hope to continue reading this and thank you.

I'm only giving one stars because this isn't your story to begin with. This is literally a google translation of a BTTH fan-fiction posted on Qidian. Original is titled 一切从斗破苍穹开始 on Qidian's main Chinese novel site.

This barely understandable mess of a synopsis is a good indicator of the quality of this novel. I can't say how well the story and plot of the novel progress, but with this level of grammar, it is basically unreadable. If this is edited, I'd be willing to give the novel a shot, but as of now that's untenable.

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(P.S. story is not his, it is stolen from quidan. Original author is Chinese.) 🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾🚾👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎

Story plot is awesome and I just want to say... FUCK YOU XIAO YAN! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NOICE GOING AUTHOR_SAN! Oh abd please don't post a chapter as a message instead leave your messages in the author's thoughts ok? Then see ya!

Completely ripped off from Qidian. It's one of the better and most well known BTTH fan-fictions on Qidian and you gave no credit whatsoever. It's called 一切从斗破苍穹开始. Although something happened to the novel on the main Chinese site, you can still find this novel on many pirated sites. This is probably literally a machine google translated novel with such bad grammar.