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Desideria
DesideriaLv145yr
2019-08-01 00:49

Now game has began. Before you know it you have been tossed over and trampled like a rag Sara...how could you even do such things without first weighing the consequences...but you thoroughly asked for it. So bring it on Lina and hard

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Daoist8975
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Elyon
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Oh Boy where do I start? I have reviewed a few novels myself and this is the first time that I found a dazzling gem. This piece of work will certainly make it big. If possible I'd like the Author to pin this review of mine so I can hold the top spot and let it be known to the world that I "Elyon" was the first one to gain honor and privilege to post a review to this novel. Yes! This is history in the making ^__^ So let's start with the ratings shall we? Writing Quality: 5/5 There are a few grammar mistakes, but to hell with them. *throws grammar Nazi's away* The story is well written in my perspective. You will understand this once you start reading the story because it will pull you in, hook, line and sinker. That first chapter was one of the best I've seen by far. It's a good opener for the story that is about to be told. Stability of Updates: 5/5 At this point in time, the author has stable releases so this is not a problem. I can already foresee the future of fangirls and fanboys pestering her to do mass releases. Well that's your problem girl~ Story Development: The pacing of the story is nice. Plot and twists are scattered here and there, which adds a nice touch of mystery to the novel. Will look forward for future updates! Character Design: 5/5 The characters have life in them. The descriptions are not forced and the presentation of the MC and her Hubby flows freely. The concept is excellent and the appeal is there. Hope the future characters that will appear in the story have more depth in them. World Background: 4/5 I could have given this a 5 star to make it a perfect 5 star rating. Unfortunately, I only give honest reviews so I have to deduct a point this time. Why? The chapters are too few! *pesters the author for more chapter releases* I promise to revisit this in the future and edit my review as soon as the world will start to expand. Overall rating: 4.8 This is the first time I gave a rating as high as this. Like I said, I could have given it a perfect 5 star. It didn't get a perfect rating because of the number of chapters. So if you like the CEO novels in this platform. You better give this one a try!

PsyberRose
PsyberRoseLv12

Just found, just read and hooked immediately. If you're into the normal CEO romance type, then this is certainly one that will capture you. It's different, it's gripping and it's captivating. Writing Quality: English isn't my first language so if there are any grammatical errors, I don't see them. The flow is smooth, the descriptions are good, and you're brought into the world very easily. Stability of Updates: It's been less than a month, and from what I see, it's very stable and regular. Story Development: Oh, there are just so many mysteries and questions, mixed in with lotsa fluff and heartwarming scenes. It's truly a wonderful mix and the way the Author puts it all together is a delicacy that is meant to be savoured. Character Design: Whoa. Seriously. FL is such a bad-ass and wonderful. Yes, there have been strong FL but somehow, there was something lacking there. THIS one, however, has it all. She's smart, skilled and yet vulnerable at the same time. She's only 'soft' with the ML (who is an equal with her) and vice versa. It's PERFECT. World Background: It's based on current Earth so have no idea why they even want this in here. If it's based on how the character's background is like, how it's portrayed then yes. It's great. It's done well. All the best Author. Definitely, a gem that will KABOOM once more people know about it. Keeping in the library and recommending to my readers as well (yes, fellow Author shamlessly talking about her own but I sincerely believe my readers would love this sort of story as well).

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