I like the concept but the MC stays in each world for such a short time that it is reducing the amount of fun the story provides. Everytime, just as the MC is about to stabalize his existence in a world, he moves on to the next, making pretty much no impact at all. As a result, we see no effect of his actions. Its like saying: check this out, I'm going to do this. And then turning it into a cliffhanger by ending that sequence at that. As a result, each build up is met with severe anticlimax by there being no climax other than a transition to a new world. Everytime just as you get interested in seeing what will happen, he will do a cliffhanger end by simply switching worlds and leaving any entertaining results out to dry. That said, the concept is really fun, and Im half tempted to write my own fic based on the combination of these worlds. The MC is a bit of a bastard but that's actually quite fun, or well it would be if we saw what effects it would have on the stories of the world he performs his actions in. Unfortunately he is long gone before we get to see the results.
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