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Just to get this out of the way, the title is misleading. The system the MC has isn’t really a “Fate System” as it sells and gives things to the user from completely other serieses with completely different power levels. During the beginning yes it could be considered so, but a couple chapters in it starts to get blurred with the whole elemental dragon bloodline(Not completely sure if the nasuverse has such a thing, Arturia’s dragon core, yes, an elemental dragon’s bloodline? Not so much.) and the boundary between “Fate” and other verses is completely shattered when you started to introduce things like the rinnegan or him being an “Asura.” This problem persists throughout the story but I guess it’s more me nagging on a small detail at this point. The relationship and romance between Jason and other characters is alright but I would generally draw the line when he starts to cuck everyone else(Grayfia and Venelana) This is as well as his perverse nature just makes him a bit more hateable for me. As for his parents and sister, they are completely nonexistent except for a couple brief(read as ‘a single’) mention(s) throughout the story. As the story progresses Jason as a character starts to get more and more arrogant. I suppose although it can be justified as he is stronger than most of the characters we have seen thus far, but again this makes him a bit more hateable for me(though I’m sure some would enjoy it). There were parts of the story that I enjoyed like Jason’s encounter/adventure with the Grigori and Slash Dog, but most of the other parts like the whole going to school in England and the first 50 or so chapters is what I really just can’t bring myself to read. Overall, when compared to some of the other fanfics that are just hard to read this one is quite a bit better. The canon characters were written nicely and the direction of the story, although a bit iffy, were still enjoyable.

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Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System

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