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ShuraTheDestroyer
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Well, this is my opinion The mc is extremely nerfed constantly to the point of being defeated by a human. He is supposed to have the heart / soul of Ashura, which are basically incarnations of war, master of combat, and he doesn't even know how to fight straight yet !!! And even though he's from the upper realm with insanely powerful parents, he evolves slower than the xianxia-cultivated novel characters. Dialogues have no emotion,are emotionless, they are simply text, they pass nothing. It still pisses me off that he saves Kuroka and asks Shirone to become Rias's servant, and she has even more potential than Kuroka herself. Another annoying fact is that mc should always interact with the gremory family, never another, always them, this is cliche to the max, another cliche is he always interact with one of the 3 factions, he could simply get closer to the Shinto faction or even the Hindu, the fact that he became Azazel's foster child literally "destroyed" the story for me. Not to mention that mc doesn't evolve into anything, emotionally, physically, or anything, it's still the same. History has evolved almost nothing in all of these chapters. And as hell a dragon lineage of ice and fire has more potential power than dragons that can duplicate and divide power infinitely, others that are conceptual beings like dream and infinity. Even if the novel has concepts of cultivation, its having power based on ice and fire is nowhere near these other dragons, Maybe that's why he's so weak compared to other dragons., it remains weak even though it is from a divine realm. Now about grammar I can not give much opinion, English is not my first language and I am not fluent in it. Although I find some grammatical errors I still find the story very readable. The refresh rate was also good so far, that the romance is stalled. But in short away, if you like a story Little elaborate and without compromise or plot building and character growth, read this story, otherwise not.

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Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System

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SD_Liv
SD_LivLv4SD_Liv

Thanks for the tip (I wanted to return, I thought that the author fixed this garbage, but it seems he just ****ed for this fan fiction) it seems that the goddess and his parents will not wait for him (google translator)

ShuraTheDestroyer
ShuraTheDestroyerLv4ShuraTheDestroyer

Yes, it is a pity that the author spoiled his own story, it had a lot of potential. The worst that he created another story in the same world and ended committing on the same mistakes that in this story, in fact this other story is even worse. This story was good in the beginning, at least to some extent!

SD_Liv:Thanks for the tip (I wanted to return, I thought that the author fixed this garbage, but it seems he just ****ed for this fan fiction) it seems that the goddess and his parents will not wait for him (google translator)