Super short chapters!! Super rushed!! Super forced plots and characters personalities. Nick Fury is a paranoid mofo so he would not go along with MC plan right off the bat. Captain America and black widow are not so fast that they can get to Nick in just a few mins of his distress signal going out. Overall very poorly written!!
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LIKEHonestly fair review, just as ive practically said in all my novels, comments, I write for personal pleasure not for thy to grade like its an actual book, if you want such qUaLitY go to a ****n bookstore! Im not angry specifically at you its just people on this site range from grammer nazi's, to the most pessimistic of assh0l3z. Moral of this story people who read the fan fiction shouldnt judge because its not just the way you want it.