Review Detail of Enigmation in Peerless Immortal Emperor

Grammar feels a little off in some places. Missing commas, incorrect sentence structure and some paragraphs feels lackluster and written poorly. Note, I gave it 3/5 for writing quality because of these reasons. Its not in any particular chapter but overall. For the plot so far, I'm not entirely sure how I feel about it. Its not particularly engaging nor does it pique my interest. Its bland and feels like I'm reading about Naruto babysitting a whole planet. The introduction of MCU as a shared universe with DBZ was interesting at least. Character wise, the portrayal of Naruto is good, I like what you did with him. He seems less emotional and less concerned about bonds, maybe cause its a harem but even then I don't know how to feel about him sleeping around. I'm not particularly big on DBZ so I'm neutral on them but so far none of the characters really interest me other than Panchy(for her interactions). I'm sure you will buff Goku to be able to slightly challenge Naruto to increase their camaraderie and "rivalry". In conclusion, as I've said, it just feels like I'm reading about Naruto babysitting a planet and their inhabitants. Maybe a bit too much, he seems to be helping so much for nothing and no apparent reason other than some oath for an hour in the hyperbolic time chamber.