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BrightWhiteNeon
BrightWhiteNeonLv45yr
2019-04-29 13:31

The writer is... kind of lazy I guess? I felt the story is just the PLOT and that's it... or was it? I mean, there is no dialogue at all and it is only the whole act of the characters and the details are no go for me. There are almost zero paragraphs from what I read and it hurts my eyes a bit. Kind of plain and boring if I should say. Overall, it is not good and I don't have much hope for this story anymore.

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Suraj_Sain
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I am Sorry but ain't writing manga so i don't have to give whole details like what the other person is say to other one i think that you have to read manga's not novels okey!

BrightWhiteNeon
BrightWhiteNeonLv4

Who are you to order me around?! I, your father, has been in this- *Cough* Sorry, my bad. But well, do as you wish then. I don't despise you or anything like that and as a not so bad person of the society, I will confess that this comment is an action for... EXP of course! P.s. Don't hate me... I'm only an ordinary class wanderer that is farming to level up...

Suraj_Sain:I am Sorry but ain't writing manga so i don't have to give whole details like what the other person is say to other one i think that you have to read manga's not novels okey!
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