*sigh I can only say that as I read I only felt boredom, really there is no development. When I read, it feels like I am reading a long long long summary. I mean seriously like it is moving to fast. The MC doesn't have any ambition, he is like more uniting the race for peace which is stupid and there is no antagonist, no excitement, I only feel boredom because as I read I feel like I already know the story. The MC is ****/sissy, no romantic or sexual development, no emotion, I mean really its like I already know the plot. Please make it interesting like him against all or troll them because between him and them and write a story(*cough summary!*cough) about unity and **** in a very fast pace, I can only say. *sigh This feels like ****
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