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so someone could be a tank huh 🤔 I literally spent the last 10 minutes looking for an ork I'm a tank meme only to find disappointment and sadness

5 from me amazing story I have read it all its better than those racist Chinese novels and most of the novels from this site ur amazing just amazing a

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After chapter 100 it goes downhill translation wise, it's like reading a machine translation also around chap 82 it seems the translator skipped a chapter or 2. Slightly different system aspect but carbord characters everywhere.

What is going on around chapter 80 fair trade - Mechanical City - Sign Up to Hex Science and Technology It seems like chapters are missing

Writing Quality - 3/5 due to some grammatical that I for the life of me cant understand sometimes. Although sometimes using context clues help. Story - 2-3/5 due to the story having good potential but riddled with forgotten characters along with constant input of sudden "mystery vibe" yet no answers are provided after so many chapters not even clues. MC - 2/5 - I would've given this a 4 if not for the fact that the MC letting his enemy go despite having his enemy hate him so much. You can even add the fact that his enemies were very manipulative most of the time but he lets them live. This was especially true during almost 3/4 of the novel. I would've understood that move had the author covered the reason for him letting them go like for example he was badly wounded or he needed to rush somewhere or something and not just because of his so called "Im in a good mood". World Background 3/5 - description was not that bad but it was not that good either. You can hardly imagine the setting and worse of all it lacks the part where the author should specify if the MC is in the game or in RL.

I enjoy the story so far however im going to pick at some things that need some brushing up on. The quality of writing drops after chapter 70 and is comparable to machine translation. I feel the that author need to take some time to proof read his chapters before he reads them. As another comment stated the chapter order is mixed up around chapter 80 to 85. (my personal opinion) I find it a bit stupid that the MC refuse to get healing skills and keeps getting buff skills that only give a 3% buff. He is essentially a glass cannon. The only reason he hasn't died is because the author has cleverly written everything in his favor i.e. deus ex machina.

brain cells go brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. ..........................................................................

the story is good and the translation ,but when you reached chapter 150 , the translation got worse.the story is good and the translation ,but when you reached chapter 150 , the translation got worse.