Review Detail of commander_pride_21 in Cultivation+

Good story, I like it until now. I hope that you don't drop it and continue until the end. I see no problem with the story and the new world but I still wanna say that we don't need an idiot MC who teaches everybody about his styles. Also, you can use grammarly to correct some little faults in the writing. I also use it to write my story. These faults don't appear too much but they still have a little impact. Continue the good work. Happy to be the one to review the story.