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goodlion
goodlionAuthor1yrgoodlion

Anyone who wants to help can comment in the latest chapter, or here, we need editors to improve chapter grammar, who has time to talk to me, I'm sure it will be much better to read with editing, remembering that the best stories here at Webnovel there are always editors to help. https://discord.gg/UVnyMfa

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Divine Talent Born Mortal

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Daniel2
Daniel2Lv5Daniel2

what is the novel's cultivation system? I still did not get it

slothyhuman
slothyhumanLv4slothyhuman

Your english doesnt seem so bad, so why is the english in the story so bad? It is partly because you need editors. But it looks like it was written by google translate or someone who doesnt speak english well. Its not about editing. Its got so much broken english that should not be there because from what i can tell your english is fine in this comment, and going off that you would expect grammatical errors, not just down right bad and broken english that makes it impossible for native speakers to read.

RawrXDx
RawrXDxLv3RawrXDx

I’ll help if you still need it.

DioSDeLCaoS
DioSDeLCaoSLv5DioSDeLCaoS

Es harén?

Aoalbjorn
AoalbjornLv3Aoalbjorn

I have never complained about grammar as mistakes would happen. But this novel doesn't look like any mistake or something like that. It looks like complete machine translation with a bit of editing here and there.

Cinque_39
Cinque_39Lv5Cinque_39

I would honestly love to help edit this novel. It seems like a nice novel and I do have some spare time during the holidays, I’m still in high school, so I won’t really be free after the holidays but yea, I’d lobe to contribute!

Lordgrim94
Lordgrim94Lv4Lordgrim94

Send me a massage if you still want an editor.

Melshan
MelshanLv6Melshan

The MC Will have a wife or Harém?

41icia
41iciaLv441icia

I really want to help edit be happy with sports it’s a pleasant read but the vocabulary holds it back reply u I f you need editor ☺️

Daoist513202
Daoist513202Lv4Daoist513202

👍

Daoist513202
Daoist513202Lv4Daoist513202

👍

_Evergreen
_EvergreenLv2_Evergreen

If you still need an editor send me a message. I will be pleased to oblige