Anyone who wants to help can comment in the latest chapter, or here, we need editors to improve chapter grammar, who has time to talk to me, I'm sure it will be much better to read with editing, remembering that the best stories here at Webnovel there are always editors to help. https://discord.gg/UVnyMfa
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Your english doesnt seem so bad, so why is the english in the story so bad? It is partly because you need editors. But it looks like it was written by google translate or someone who doesnt speak english well. Its not about editing. Its got so much broken english that should not be there because from what i can tell your english is fine in this comment, and going off that you would expect grammatical errors, not just down right bad and broken english that makes it impossible for native speakers to read.