Review Detail of nightowl in

I really appreciate the story line and its really very interesting but that (&quote)thing is spoiling every thing . It isn't allowing one to start their imagination. I'm feeling so bad for author......your story is really really very nice and I really liked it but its imposible for me to even read more then 8 chapters. I hope u can find an editor sooner then later. Right now i'm droping this book but in future if you edit it and repost it you'll find me as your genuine fan. ☺☺☺