"As compensation, he was given an infinite amount of wish which he only used 10 of them because of his generosity" Just that make me want to puke , what generosity he is just a moron that does not know a single wish can let him survive a bit more in a world where he could die at any moment....

Honestly, while i like your writing, i mutch prefer your first story, this one is just a cliche OP wishes/System MC from the start with no sense for growth. You chose to go from a kinda of unique way for powers to a overly used one. So, while i don't personaly like this story, i hope that you continue to write.

Well you should explain right what novel you're basing on fanfic, so far I do not know which one is right. 😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬 But it's very good, the story to tell the truth. I'm excited, waiting for more chapters.

(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ)

Overall, I like where the author is going with this, but there are a few noticeable problems. First of all the Character is not developed well enough for readers to grow a sense of attachment. He grows too powerful too quickly which gets rid of the tense-aspect of a book. Also, the stability of the updates is really erratic, at least when I was reading it. I hope the author can rethink his strategy on approching plot and character development. However this book has a lot of potentials, and I hope the Author can polish it even further.

Morgiana again, morgiana again, morgiana again!!!!! Morgiana again, morgiana again, morgiana again!!!!! Morgiana again, morgiana again, morgiana again!!!!! Morgiana again, morgiana again, morgiana again!!!!!

This novel-i mean story is legit "wishful thinking" .. First the author create a GLOSSARY of the FANFIC which is a big NO if i wanna make a good novel because the "world building" is very important part... Second a CHAT style of setting for a monologue will always fail of your not PRO writer... Third. An Op MC is already tasteless if his OP from the start but the author create a SUPER OP MC is even worst ... 4th . The PLOT is not well planned enough ... its like y just wrote what comes out ur mind base on previews chapter as referens... 5th ... NOT enough EXPLAINATION ... overall this is 2 star or 1.5 star...

interesting

Make a giant harem please also ruin the protagonist in the novel also make me powerful not to much also adding a fact changing his race. Please keep making it I always mad when people doesn’t finish their story