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crazymee
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2019-04-30 23:39

First of all thanks for the story .... I just read the first chapter n was just curious to let u know that u should work on every details for eg u wrote she woke up n it was 3 am n his brother comes n tells her to get ready n come for breakfast its quite not matching .....hope u dont mind .... Still looking forward for it all the very best

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Asmita_Mukherjee
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Oh never mind, it's just that she had an early flight that day 🙂 But I closed this novel already & I'm working on a new one...Please check it & write a review Plzzz search... "Lyricist: Her Revenge"

crazymee
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For sure all the very best for ur new work

Asmita_Mukherjee:Oh never mind, it's just that she had an early flight that day 🙂 But I closed this novel already & I'm working on a new one...Please check it & write a review Plzzz search... "Lyricist: Her Revenge"
crazymee
crazymeeLv5

Let me know bout ur new novel

Asmita_Mukherjee:Oh never mind, it's just that she had an early flight that day 🙂 But I closed this novel already & I'm working on a new one...Please check it & write a review Plzzz search... "Lyricist: Her Revenge"
Asmita_Mukherjee
Asmita_MukherjeeAuthor

Sure, I released a new chapter. It's "Lyricist: Her Revenge". & its true I missed some details while writing the previous novel. I'm really grateful for your help...🙂

crazymee
crazymeeLv5

😄

Asmita_Mukherjee:Sure, I released a new chapter. It's "Lyricist: Her Revenge". & its true I missed some details while writing the previous novel. I'm really grateful for your help...🙂
Asmita_Mukherjee
Asmita_MukherjeeAuthor

😋

crazymee:😄
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