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2019-06-11 12:37

How old is the author? Is he/she a Filipino? The story line is good with futuristic background but instead of a beautiful world its a world of prejudice and full of revenge. Will the Philippines really become that some day? Where"s the bayanihan spirit and hospitality that we are known of? Will there be no more of this in the future? I saw the depiction of our political system that caused this era to rise. Yes, somehow we are easily mesmerized by promises from charismatic politicians and sometimes are very tolerant specially if we idolized them. They cant do wrong unless someone is brave enough with solid evidence will shout out, this will tip the other neutral group. However, the loyalists will always be a loyalists. I cant imagine a world with no ocean, no seas, no rivers, no waterfall especially in the Philippines where we are surrounded by all types of water bodies? This is very dry indeed. So the islands must have glued together? All together the story is exciting and slowly building up to more exciting things. Its not dragging and full of surprising information in each chapter. Congratulations to the author! Have you been writing long?

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This has been the best review I have ever encountered while writing this story. And yes, thank you for noticing all the main key points of the story. Tatak Pinoy po ito. I was 18 when I started writing this story. Bagong manunulat pa lang po. And it tackles about the current issues we face, in our government, the way Filipinos think, some of our cultures and more about the 'nakasanayang kaugalian' natin. The characters, the settings the whole plot were the imagery of the current issues. It's more of the results of the past, which was the present. It's more of the tendencies of the Filipinos and how it will affect the future. But all in, thank you so much. Your review encourage me to right more of this book. Thank you!

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axisixas:This has been the best review I have ever encountered while writing this story. And yes, thank you for noticing all the main key points of the story. Tatak Pinoy po ito. I was 18 when I started writing this story. Bagong manunulat pa lang po. And it tackles about the current issues we face, in our government, the way Filipinos think, some of our cultures and more about the 'nakasanayang kaugalian' natin. The characters, the settings the whole plot were the imagery of the current issues. It's more of the results of the past, which was the present. It's more of the tendencies of the Filipinos and how it will affect the future. But all in, thank you so much. Your review encourage me to right more of this book. Thank you!
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