Review Detail of AkagiFan in God of Virtual Reality(Dropped)

It's my first story to read about sci-fi and so far it's interesting and sounds realistic. Character planning is nice and setting up the background for readers tells writer is living the world. Total gamer would love to see a game like this exists but just the dying part would be hard... Overall the story is going on smoothly and let's see the more adventures waiting for readers and Hector (male protagonist)