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2019-05-01 19:42

It is a very nice story, cute characters and I love the way they interact. It is not slow paced neither fast, I find it just perfect as the story advances. Taking into consideration that this is the authors first novel I am very impressed. Well done! I hope it will be continued and that it won’t be a very long novel, I hate novels that are very long as they lose quality . The language is not perfect, but U could see only minor mistakes that did not bother me at all. Thank you for making my day great ( i binged read all the chapters today 😊).

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