Review Detail of LyingCrowPromises in Ranker's Quest

I quite like the beginning and the premise of it. A world in which VR exists and is used for more than just games, though it has entered that frontier too. A story is about a ranker from the first VRMMO game that intends to go to the next one because the first game has finished. It does not seem all that special, but it is a twist that is not really used and I like it. The main character is a normal guy that has friends and a younger brother that will follow him into the game. I like the character design a lot, and have no complaints about it. World background is also interesting although it is just beginning. Fight on author.