Review Detail of illeannne in Ranker's Quest
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A nice story that I would definitely come back to in the future. Usually, I would have a problem with the System in these kinds of stories, but that problem is fortunately nonexistent here. The only problem I would have is with the flow, as it gets somewhat rocky in certain parts. The chapters are also a bit too long for my liking, but that would differ from person to person. Overall, great job!
Ranker's Quest
Filea
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Ah sure.. it is also my biggest dilemma to continue the story. I want to create a quick progress and move directly to the main conflict but can't seem to find a way to confront it. Thanks a lot for pointing it out! *saya domisili Bandung
illeannne:Btw, domisili manaa?
Wuaaa sy di Riau.. Kebetulan gedung Telkomsel kemarin kebakaran, Indihome rusak :) Bakarlah kuota demi swap review >:)
Filea:Ah sure.. it is also my biggest dilemma to continue the story. I want to create a quick progress and move directly to the main conflict but can't seem to find a way to confront it. Thanks a lot for pointing it out! *saya domisili Bandung
illeannne:Wuaaa sy di Riau.. Kebetulan gedung Telkomsel kemarin kebakaran, Indihome rusak :) Bakarlah kuota demi swap review >:)