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In my own honest opinion, the whole concept is cute. It's engaging in its own way and I actually understood where this is going. However, I cannot continue reading this no matter how good the idea was because of the way it was written. It lacks emotion and details. (though I'm no any better) but still, I advice that you work more about the quality of your chapter instead of rushing it because the premise is really good and it would be a waste if it won't improve.

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Wife is Delicious- a tale of chasing romance

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SURE I'm working on them. widening my vocabulary and describing things better

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stella2138Authorstella2138

hi,i've posted chapter 172