Review Detail of TheOneAndOnlyBoss in In The Naruto World With An Mp3 Player- Lyrical Fighting Style

Item: In The Naruto World With An Mp3 Player- Lyrical Fighting Style
Rating: 5

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TheOneAndOnlyBossAuthor5yrTheOneAndOnlyBoss

Heyo, I'm the author....well the author whose picking the story back up after if it was dropped. I hope you like story, but if you don't then feel free to leave a bad review and what I did wrong. However, if you leave a bad review simply because how I wrote something isn't something you would do then don't. If your going to criticize then put something about my writing or the harem or this being a "wish fulfillment" novel. Anyways this is a harem so if you don't like it then you can leave. Hope you enjoy 😁😁😁😁

In The Naruto World With An Mp3 Player- Lyrical Fighting Style

TheOneAndOnlyBoss

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SucoDeFrutaLv5SucoDeFruta

Esaa história não vai para frente se você ficar fazendo o mc ser um cachorrinha de Konoha, tudo que Kakashi ou Tsunade manda o mc abaixa a cabeça e obedecer??????? Muito decepcionante sua história assim como seu mc, para mim já deu estou largando isso

5yr

Tsubasa93Lv13Tsubasa93

So much illogical plot progression. Everyone just rolling with things that are completely out of whack and everyone is ooc. From being held prisoner to somehow gaining Kakashi's trust in less than 10 minutes... Dropped it right there.

5yr