Don't be discouraged, ralphierce. Just give your best in writing. People usually don't write anything, but they are following and reading every chapter. Continue writing but build your writing skills for a better story someday. The one in charge of the contracted authors before said that if your book won't get much recognition, then finish the book. And write another one. Slowly, people will follow from one book to another. I always try to finish every book, building a reputation for myself. I want the readers to see that I'm an author who finishes every story I started and someone who gives her best to her stories.

I've partly read your story. I left a comment in chapter 1. Smile. 😁