Review Detail of Astral464 in My school friend is a Lesbian and she's on to me.

Item: My school friend is a Lesbian and she's on to me.
Rating: 3.6

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Astral464Lv143yrAstral464

Could be better with the speech like using "" so we know when they are speaking and if two people are in a conversation you start on a new line for a different person speaking eg. "Hi I'm _____" "oh, hi I'm ____" "I'm new here please take care of me" "Of course" ------ It's simple but it helps :)

My school friend is a Lesbian and she's on to me.

MixGamingDelWN

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MixGamingDelWNAuthorMixGamingDelWN

I use "" on my other works already! I'm just using this as a practice but, if the time comes i will use "" for this novel too!

3yr

Astral464Lv14Astral464

thanks for clarifying that :)

MixGamingDelWN:I use "" on my other works already! I'm just using this as a practice but, if the time comes i will use "" for this novel too!

3yr