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Review Detail of Bruhnoe in Reincarnate Into High School DxD

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Bruhnoe
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There are many details in the novel, which in my opinion, has no certain logic and deviates from the original story. One of the things is that the original Maous are portrayed as good people, at least that's what I understood in the novel, but if I'm not mistaken, the originals were evil. Another thing that many authors repeat is the fact that the reincarnated protagonist, who was an ***** in the first life, is so emotional. And there's a detail that I can not pass up. The war ended almost 100,000 years before Issei and Rias in his novel, but on the Wiki (https://highschooldxd.fandom.com/wiki/Three_Factions) says that not even a thousand years passed. There are three factions that fought against each other, not two sides. And one more thing, you author said he will leave his mother out of the scene after bringing her back, which I do not understand. Or will you tell me that the protagonist will separate from his mother after all this time to bring her back? Anyway, I no longer feel like reading this novel. Good luck, hope you get better and keep writing since I believe you write as a hobby.

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Reincarnate Into High School DxD

Raikou1688

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Raikou1688
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Welp, I didn't really look into the back ground far enough when it started to so write so I just went with the flow. But, I will thank you for an actual review about my story instead of just giving a 1 star for nonsensical reason like the other two reviews.

Justieif
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Thats The Whole reason its a fanfic