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ABT_007
ABT_007Lv145yr
2019-04-16 18:48

Well I am really liking how the story developing. Hope the MC is not too OP at first but builds up his strength as time goes on. Its a very nice fan fic so far and hopes it does not get dropped and more chapters are released because the suspense is killing me ✨ . More chapters Author

A One Piece Adventure

UltimateGodlyGene
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Avariciousimmortal
AvariciousimmortalLv10

I enjoyed reading this piece of fan fiction, three chapters so far! I'm already hyped for the next few chapters! Keep up the good work Author! I will be waiting for the next chapters XD

5yr

RX78
RX78Lv1

Just a boost to keep the author going. Time for a serious review, the writing is already better than the standard fan fiction on this site but only time will tell. The real question is how much the author wants to follow along the original plot, because not many would want to read a retelling of the adventurers of the crew + a new character. Will the author give it another perspective? I don't know, but I do like One Piece fanfics so here's a high review

5yr
lelisPw
lelisPwLv4

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5yr
Gt_Prince
Gt_PrinceLv6

why dont you use the gravity to train his and the crew body also let him tell them about the grandline and about the 3 powers haki dragons everything

5yr
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