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Well nice read overall just to past time. But as more chapters go.. i lost all the fun to read it. It's getting boring with how slow the story development is. Even i have to skip some chapters. It's really too slow, better if the author put some time skip here and there. I don't know if it's the author intention to highlight naruto emotional development, but i think it's just too much. Thanks for your work anyways.
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I'll try speeding up but I'll probably butcher it by accident as I am a new writer. All fanfictions that I'm currently writing about is to increase my writing ability and experiences. So I am sorry that you are unsatisfied with my work and all I can say is that I will become better as I know my faults. There are no excuses for my lack of ability. Once again, thank you for taking the time to read it in the first place.