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Choji_5074
Choji_5074Lv104yr
2020-12-01 06:48

Honestly the book isn’t that bad, say for some minor grammar mistakes. I enjoy the cinical naruto, the only thing that gets a little annoying is his constant talks of leaving the village. While not as frequent as sasugay talking about revenge, he still repeats it often enough that it gets irritating. Otherwise its a good book and I can’t wait for it to update.

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Nathanor
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I love the story. Just don't drop it. Don't let other readers affect your appetite and momentum in whatever you gonna write.. Just dont make him as naive as b4 and make him a little more decisive.. Overall? I love it!:)

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Gotta have a good and capable Harem husband. Uzumaki has ridiculous vitality for all his girls and women. So many jaded, lonely, mistreated, neglected, mind screwed beauties in all these art imitating life universes left miserable from lack of exceptional men. Why leave so many girls unhappy? Living and getting ahead is much easier to do when your family is large and moving toward the common causes. First generation kingdoms can be amazing when it's the king, queens and the trusted people to build the kingdom, each doing their parts. Later generations cause problems and destroy what's built when they earn nothing because it's been all given.

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The_Monk
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Before I start I want to give a disclaimer that I have never held fan-fiction in a good light but having said that... I like this one. Truth be told, it is very obvious that some of the groundwork for the novel draws heavy inspiration from other anime, manga/manhwa, and light novels. Despite this fact, I believe that the writing is fairly decent and only seems to be improving further into the novel. The plot is simplistic yet satisfying and many characters remain truthful to their original portrayals. These are the simplest yet most vital reasons for why I like this fan-fiction above many others I’ve read. Above all else, I would like to address the author. The passion and care that is put into your work is felt by many people and you obviously have a certain level of ability for writing. Your willingness to take risks in your writing and incorporate some ideas that you have seen recommended in comments is actually a rather smart play that will hopefully continue to serve you well. I am certain that as long as you continue with such dedication towards your works that people will always recognize it and support you as you become a better author. Happy Reading Folks, The Monk IY

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Pavan1234
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Excellent novel. This novel has well written interesting character interaction scenes. The MC is also an interesting character. The Gamer ability in a story is always a plus for me. Hope author writes this novel completely without dropping. Gamer stories get dropped a lot.

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Sangat baik, hanya MC naruto harusnya tidak akan pernah seperti itu,....... karena sepintar pintarnya naruto akan lebih mementingkan perasaan daripada logika,...... itulah isrimewanya Prontagonis Naruto

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please dont drop..........best story of naruto....please........update.....please i have been waiting like two months...................................

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KarmaKalo
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This is by far the best naruto fan fiction I’ve ever read. If you’re unsure still check it out and you won’t be disappointed. I feel like it’s a very realistic approach to how naruto should act and how he should have viewed the village in my opinion. Great work author and I hope you can continue this story soon 👍🏽

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