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Writing quality is good. Character design, world background, story development all great. Wait first, synopsis is cool and nice. Catchy if I must say. Now the review proper. The writing style is great. Little or no errors, which can be overlooked considering how great the story is. From the synopsis, one already has an idea of the palace struggles, but on etching the author did that catches his readers off guard into a swell ride.... Let me explain. Okay, already expecting the dark troubles of court life, one wouldn't expect the story to start with the cuteness of two children, not both princess but a childish love which ended up in betrothal. That was a nice w@y to put your readers at ease and whisk their expectation away. So the first two chapters did just that to elate us the readers. But to every happy fairytale, there comes the down and dark side of life. The brining joy and hope all dashed to pieces by our dear author. No fair you know. Anyway back to the story. He crushed that hope and plunged us into the bitter sweet reality of the novel. Oh and his details about the surrounding, people and expressions are on point, gotta learn that as a writer too. Let me not spoil the joy of reading. When I started this book, I wondered if to was going to be one of the few I added to my library and it won. Saving this book to follow up, battery already @ 3%. Good work author, keep it up. Would send a power stone as my support for your book. Wow, my longest review so far 1532 words.

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The Rightful Queen

CailinMatthews

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CailinMatthews
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Thank you for all your 1,532 words. I highly appreciate them. If you want any tips or suggestions on writing, please feel free to ask in the inkstone server. I am also there but will not be available all the time. There are numerous writers who would willingly help out. Ganbatte!

BaeVida
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Are u on discord? If yes, msg me @BaeVida#7167 pls. Wud obviously need help n advice. Thanks

CailinMatthews:Thank you for all your 1,532 words. I highly appreciate them. If you want any tips or suggestions on writing, please feel free to ask in the inkstone server. I am also there but will not be available all the time. There are numerous writers who would willingly help out. Ganbatte!