Beautiful. I have to say that the story so far is masterfully written and effortlessly immersive. The descriptions used are lovely and draw the reader in. The action in this story is written in such a way that makes you feel you are there on the scene. The story is currently moving at a moderate pace and the world building is currently great. The quality of the writing is better than a lot of the novels on this website. There are little to no grammatical errors that I can currently find. Looking forward to more! Keep up the good work, author :)
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