Review Detail of Veronica8 in Darling in the Mask

This story has a lot of potential and I think will do quite well at this site. It's a high pace action-romance with diabolical and power hungry businessmen in something of an oligopoly. The ML and FL are two OP type of characters in their own given fields and experience, pulling the story along. I did struggle with the story's pacing, finding it too fast, and with little moments to know the characters better. They were doing a lot of action or setup, but the meaning to those actions felt short of the mark. I really recommend slowing the pace a little by building up your characters' motivations and subtleties as you go. They had a traumatic experience when they were 12 yrs, what subtle quirks would they carry into their *****hood from that experience? I'd imagine paranoia and distrust would be key ones. Otherwise, it was an enjoyable read and with a bit of refining can be another great power ranker here.