Ah and here we have another good novel flourishing on the side less noticed. I am so happy to read this. But one thing that I gotta point out... please don't use too many paras to describe the same thing. It would look better if the paras are put together. Not too long but not too short either. The current one looks like one liners. Except for this one thing and a few negligible others, everything else is good. Overall it's a good read and loved it.
PiperShea
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