Review Detail of PsyberRose in C: Summoner & Magic

Part of a review swap and at time of writing, there were 15 Chapters. Overall, I enjoyed the story. It's engaging, interesting and MC appears to be one who is human enough (as in, realistic). I gather this would be the weak-strong type of character. Writing Quality: English isn't my first language so most of the time, I don't spot any mistakes in grammar or have any constructive comment on sentence structure. As long as I can read it smoothly, I am content. Overall, the quality of writing is top notch with some basic minimal mistakes that I have to point out / have advice on: 1. It's best if you break down your paragraphs more, with reference to people talking. Instead of having it all bunched up in one paragraph, have each speech in its own paragraph. 2. "I" is always capatalised, even in the middle of a sentence. Thus, instead of "Though i doubt i will be able to gain much from this battle with you", it should be "Though I doubt I will be able to gain much from this battle with you" I gave an extra 1* for effort that can be seen in improving. Stability of Updates : 5* Story Development: pace is good, things are picking up. The magic aspect is clearly explained and it's engaging enough. Character Design & World Background: Good characters and world background. Can see the amount of detail and work that was put in to create them, especially the World Background. All the best Author!