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DrakendelLv55yr
2019-05-25 07:09

There is a solid basis of an idea here but it's just not executed very well, i recommend a proof reader/editor to help iron out grammatical errods and story ideas before posting. Some of the characters seem to react or say things odd for there character (but thats ok because it's a fanfic) but make sure they arent to over the top. Finally have a plan as to where you want the story to go.

In Fairy Tail with Djinn Equipment

RaulXD
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you're right, and I will try to improve, but English is something that little by little I am learning, so I would pray some patience. As for the editor, if in the future this novel becomes something popular, then I will take other measures. but pir the moment will only be me. ty for read and I'm also uploading the novel again, do not ask please. https://m.webnovel.com/book/13862444606829905

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Good idea but the mc is talentless to the point of spending months training without much to show for it ...............................................................

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