Review Detail of NightFoxxFan in The Strongest Unknown Race

OMG I don’t know what country you are coming from but I didn’t start reading this because the grammar is soooooooooooo so so so soooo bad just in the introduction alone if your not from a English based nation write it in your own language then google translate it or something if you are then please go back to the third grade I’m sorry I don’t want to be mean and it actually sounded fairly decent from the introduction but if you write a book the very first requirement is to have a decent grammar in any language other wise it ruins the story and turns it into home work of some kind just trying to understand and in my honest opinion you need to get better and grammar or get a editor so people will not need to burn their brains out thinking about what your writing.