OwO This was similar to my own one shot in some ways. Sad: ✅ Depressing: ✅ Angst: definitely ✅ Uncertain ending: Yeah, I'm not so sure about that. She said she'll reunite with him. So will she die too? Will she wait till rebirth? Is this a cliffhanger that author left for us? Writing quality: Definitely a five. It was simple, fluent, yet descriptive. Stability of updating: It's a nonsense parameter for original authors anyways. Story development: Keeping in mind that this is a one shot, I can tell that the story was proceeding smoothly. The words didn't jump over one another and kept the process languid. Character design: Yeah, the mc is a depressed person. Obviously, she just caused her lover's death... World background: Not much has been mentioned but I can understand you won't be able to write much about it in a one shot. Still, I gave this a four star. Overall:4.8 It was satisfying enough to read. ♥ ♥ ♥
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LIKELostPrinceOfWoods:You also participated in wpc #63 with this story???????????????
LostPrinceOfWoods:You also participated in wpc #63 with this story???????????????
NatsumeRikka:Wait wait wait, not the same story, I wrote my own... It was just a bit similar to this author's.
LostPrinceOfWoods:I asked about your story... sorry not to mention.. you also wrote your story for wpc ??
Yay! Welp, Idk if you've read it already, but if you click my profile, you'll see a book named 'Thoughts of A Disillusioned Heart'. That's the book. Thanks ♥
LostPrinceOfWoods:Yeah