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I'm actually a bit astounded as I don't know what to say. I've never been asked to review to review such a story before. But here goes. Writing quality; The writing here was really good and smooth, not many errors, just a few. gtability of updates; Stability is good, so I'm given it a 5. Story development; The story is progressing well and at a great pace. Cgaracter design, good.
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I really liked the main female character, Sara, I like how she confronted Frank when he misbehaved, but, she doesn't really know wha she wants, cause she gets a bit aroused, and her relationship with Ash is also ... not cliche. I really liked how bold you were at describing scenes most esp ### not everyone can do that. In general it was unusual, which is good, because people are getting tired of the same old stories. You did a really good job with the writing and composition. Its on point. And its really funny how perverted Frank is.
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