Review Detail of Good_Light_Sleep in deleted_book_

Let's talk about the first problem, the age gap between Frank and Sara is just too big, six year just doesn't seem comfortable, but that is my opinion whatever sails your boat. The second one is the characters, I can't see any sparks between Sara and Frank maybe everything will change down the line but now it is like a one sided love so there is not much feel at all. The pacing of the novel could be a little faster at the start or it is just me as I usually read action novels who knows? But it doesn't really affect the story it just makes it flow better so I still gave you five stars on story development. The world is explained at the start which is nice, just make everything flow better and the novel will be better. Good job. :D