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It's only 3 chapters at the time of writing, and I normally wait until 10 chapters before reviewing. However, doing this extra early as part of a review swap. Overall, I found the novel interesting and not like what I had initially expected. It's up my alley so added to library. Writing Quality: As English isn't my first language, I found this to be okay and does not disrupt my reading too much. Any grammatical errors are negligible and I can still read smoothly. Hence, 4* Stability of Updates: too soon to tell but 5* out of good faith. Story Development: It's better than I had expected initially, based on what the Author had said in the forums. I thought there was going to be smut scenes even from Ch.1 but was pleasantly surprised to see that there is going to be a buildup. Not much happening in 3 chapters but you can see the struggle the ML (I think he is) is going through. Character Design & World Background: Too soon to tell but has potential.
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Liked it!
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Yes, definitely! That rush where your face just splits into a grin and it's like you got a shot of happiness. Why Frank? Because he's cute and being tortured. (*⸰‿-) The 'Choice' idea is a good one but so risky. Personally, I love to make the reader part of the writing process as well but it would mean I need them to actually be more active in commenting. In the end, I'm just happy if they actually feel comfortable enough to come out of hiding and tell me their thoughts and desires. When they actually do, I always try to accommodate that. I, too, enjoy the interaction but I hope I'm not clogging up too much with such a wall of text! (´･_･`)
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Okay! Noted on the option bit. As for the rest ... ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ... whatever you feel passionate to write about, feel free to do so! Breaking the fourth wall is a concept that I could never pull off, though.
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