Im disappointed, after one evening and 200 chapters: -ultra short chapters thats filled with 1/3 of stats spam, some parts ive skipped bcs of bore content - this game is more like cultivation novel than vr game -side characters are like not existant -as i see lates uploads dates (chap 330) not very stable -i see you shadow hack
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LIKEThe word count of chapters do increase as you go on, but it's up to you anyway. As for the cultivation elements, it was never said that it would be a pure vr game, it's supposed to hold some of both worlds. Finally, thank you for investing time to read this, and sorry that it wasn't up to your taste.
Well im a bookworm, ive read easily few hundred thousand books both online novels and paper books, what i hate the most its if book ends too fast, thats why below 1 chap/day is very bare min for me, i know its not easy to write, but im selfish here. Also your very short chapters (pre 200) are filled with stat spam, thats not bad in itself but ratio to text is too little.... And last one, no idea why but i skipped alot of text, more like 10%-20%, means got bored.... Try look fo reference in shadow cheat (omni cheat) spirit realm (lightning cultivation) devil cage (trapped in underground vr game)
LightningAsura:Side note: the upload is actually stable, but irl situations happen, so just judging from one instance is a bit...
Well im a bookworm, ive read easily few hundred thousand books both online novels and paper books, what i hate the most its if book ends too fast, thats why below 1 chap/day is very bare min for me, i know its not easy to write, but im selfish here. Also your very short chapters (pre 200) are filled with stat spam, thats not bad in itself but ratio to text is too little.... And last one, no idea why but i skipped alot of text, more like 10%-20%, means got bored.... Try look fo reference in shadow cheat (omni cheat) spirit realm (lightning cultivation) devil cage (trapped in underground vr game)
LightningAsura:Side note: the upload is actually stable, but irl situations happen, so just judging from one instance is a bit...
Well im a bookworm, ive read easily few hundred thousand books both online novels and paper books, what i hate the most its if book ends too fast, thats why below 1 chap/day is very bare min for me, i know its not easy to write, but im selfish here. Also your very short chapters (pre 200) are filled with stat spam, thats not bad in itself but ratio to text is too little.... And last one, no idea why but i skipped alot of text, more like 10%-20%, means got bored.... Try look fo reference in shadow cheat (omni cheat) spirit realm (lightning cultivation) devil cage (trapped in underground vr game)
LightningAsura:Side note: the upload is actually stable, but irl situations happen, so just judging from one instance is a bit...
Well im a bookworm, ive read easily few hundred thousand books both online novels and paper books, what i hate the most its if book ends too fast, thats why below 1 chap/day is very bare min for me, i know its not easy to write, but im selfish here. Also your very short chapters (pre 200) are filled with stat spam, thats not bad in itself but ratio to text is too little.... And last one, no idea why but i skipped alot of text, more like 10%-20%, means got bored.... Try look fo reference in shadow cheat (omni cheat) spirit realm (lightning cultivation) devil cage (trapped in underground vr game)
LightningAsura:Side note: the upload is actually stable, but irl situations happen, so just judging from one instance is a bit...
what I'm trying to say is that release is normally a daily release tho >.> anyway, it's ok and all up to you if you want to read more or not, cheers!
Apachaj:Well im a bookworm, ive read easily few hundred thousand books both online novels and paper books, what i hate the most its if book ends too fast, thats why below 1 chap/day is very bare min for me, i know its not easy to write, but im selfish here. Also your very short chapters (pre 200) are filled with stat spam, thats not bad in itself but ratio to text is too little.... And last one, no idea why but i skipped alot of text, more like 10%-20%, means got bored.... Try look fo reference in shadow cheat (omni cheat) spirit realm (lightning cultivation) devil cage (trapped in underground vr game)
If you like crafting things i recommend spending my retirement in a game very solid/detailed explanation/ title mc is old grandpa with family/friends tho. The best deal there is this guy actualy make mechanical robots/golems with magic & alchemy. Another one is Legendary Mechanic insane good book pure mechanics crafts tho.. This one if u enjoy it feel free to read.... Ive drpped it..