The story is interesting. But i found the FL character less believable with few flaws making its character and plot a little boring. The novel isnt bad instaead the story line is very good just that i dont feel it believable that the FL is someone from the underworld that to an heiress of someone powerful in the underworld. Her actions gives away to her being someone from the underworld. As a person being in the dark for most of her life should be cautious of her every step that too at a time when theres a bounty on her head plus when she suddenly gets tonkonw about her twin sis from her sister's foster father when she is on the run how and why couldnt she find it suspicious. This i felt was the most foolish thing she did agreeing to her sister's foster fathers plans without any suspicion. The first thing she did in the story made me feel she a fake but i let go and read the rest then again found her in similar situations which given her circumstances and descriptions should have done better..her weak character description makes her less convincing makeing the story a little dull and boring where her actions csn be seen through from before.
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LIKEI’ll like to disagree. From what I’ve read so far, she was sheltered and did not want any part of the underworld life. If anything, it made sense that she wasn’t aware that she was tailed and her agreeing to the plan. She’s naive and I think she’ll probably develop well as the story progresses.