Review Detail of Kaasher_june4 in Circumventing Fate
Review detail
A typical story about transmigrating girl from modern times to the past (a lot of mystery in between involving that). I didn’t mind the story in the beginning, I quite liked it . But as the chapters go on, she keeps having these long ass crazy monologues that gives people headache (they were funny in the beginning and then annoying towards the middle). I don’t know about you but that turned me off as I kept reading. And the mystery is not written pretty well . I don’t know how explain this aspect . It’s like the author wants us to know there is a mystery, you get that part but it is not shown through actions (maybe this is not the best way to put it) but it’s just confusing and for me it was not worth it so I stopped reading it midway. But other than that, not bad I should say. I thought there should be an honest critic here instead of just generously giving away high ratings. Good luck reading it!
Circumventing Fate
MiraiSaesang
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Thank you for giving the novel a try...I understand your reservations, her thoughts do tend to spiral sometimes and the mystery is slow build piece by piece puzzle that expands and paints a picture as you go through the story so it's understable that it doesn't appeal to everyone. Again, thank you for giving the novel a try!🤗
You're welcome as well and thank you~ I do admit those 2 chapters you stopped at were quite thought heavy and I had been meaning to revise them for a long time. Your review here gave me the push to finally get on it and revamp them....But there are no chapters after that point that are thought heavy like that. I did realize at that point of writing that thoughts were getting a bit extra so the thoughts are quite toned down the rest of the chapters. That part of the story was a major turning point plot wise and writer wise 😂🤣...Anyway, if you're ever bored enough, perha** give it another try then~🤗
Kaasher_june4:You are welcome! The monologues turned me and some other readers away but it was not bad all together. Thank you for writing this and I hope it gains more popularity 😊