Review Detail of MyOwnStory in Princess Lyn: Fleeting Dreams

Writing: Going to give this 5 stars, while there are areas that can be approved upon. Unlike the first time I read this authors works, she has improved considerably. Plot, Character, very good. The pacing is neither too slow nor too fast. I can tell there's a solid plot and direction in where the story is going. For the characters introduced, right now the ones with most character development other than Lyn and Kazuya are Rhys. World Background, gradually being added in. Not too much that it overwhelms you. Update stability, simply amazing. Can't wait to read more.