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Hi_Rosa_3137Lv45yr
2019-08-10 07:03

I won't really recommend this book to everyone who has time to spare. You feel all the emotions from the character as you read it's an amazing book you will regret it if you don't

Princess Lyn: Fleeting Dreams

XOMatsumaeohana
4.7
700 Chs

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XOMatsumaeohana
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Author Review - Yes this story is part of a series This is the first book, but the second book Queen Lyn was written first. Prequel: Princess Lyn : Queen Lyn Sequel: Empress Lyn The story flow won't be disrupted even if you read Queen Lyn first due to the 'flashbacks' • Plan --> 300-600 Chapters (depends) • Starting from Chapter 35 of Queen Lyn: Clash of Kingdoms, I'll try to mirror the chapters from here. So reading them both at the same time helps. • Writing Quality: I'm not a very good writer, though my writing style has developed since Dream star beginning chapters. I still have a lot to improve on, just message me on the comments section if I make any mistakes. Or head over to the official discord channel. https://discord.gg/9Cwt9Jz

6yr

Winter_Prison
Winter_PrisonLv14

Going to give the author five stars, I know writing quality can be improved. But in contrast to her first story she's gotten so much better 👍 extra star for her efforts. Normally I break down my reviews, but since there's not a lot of chapters.. - If you've read QLCK you'll notice the contrast between the Lyn from when she's 22 and the present time frame for Princess Lyn when she's sixteen. Here we get a glim**e of the vague mysteries surrounding Lyn from Queen Lyn. Actually reading them alongside each other is quite fun, since you can connect the pieces. - The ML, on the other story he hasn't shown up yet. So I'm glad to see him at last. As usual the author does a great job describing her characters thoughts and feelings. - World Background: Only advice is to do it in small chunks, no need to rush. - This story has the potential to get into top rankings if the author maintains a balanced pace.

6yr
xXyuzuXx
xXyuzuXxLv13

Like the author mentioned this story is part of a series. While Queen Lyn Clash Of Kingdoms heavily focus on sovereign politics, trust. Princess Lyn explores where everything started, including the romance story of the ML Kazuya and Lyn. This is guarantee read to read alongside each other.

6yr
misaki
misakiLv4

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5yr
ReikoC
ReikoCLv11

Finally have time to read this prequel. First of all, I want to point out how distinctively different this is from the other book Queen Lyn Clash Of Kingdoms. Both use the fantasy and romance them. But Queen Lyn focuses more on the politics and conflict. There's traces of that in Princess Lyn, but mixed in with the romance focus of Lyn and Kazuya (glad to see this mysterious ML at last). The background content regarding the Kingdoms and power system is explained a lot more here too. So all the gaps are filled in. Reading them alongside each other is fun, but if you want to get the sufficient information regarding Kingdoms. I'd start here.

5yr
JohnnyKbca
JohnnyKbcaLv4

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5yr
MyOwnStory
MyOwnStoryLv11

Writing: Going to give this 5 stars, while there are areas that can be approved upon. Unlike the first time I read this authors works, she has improved considerably. Plot, Character, very good. The pacing is neither too slow nor too fast. I can tell there's a solid plot and direction in where the story is going. For the characters introduced, right now the ones with most character development other than Lyn and Kazuya are Rhys. World Background, gradually being added in. Not too much that it overwhelms you. Update stability, simply amazing. Can't wait to read more.

5yr
_ShokoYura_
_ShokoYura_Lv10

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6yr
Sigheti
SighetiLv4

I truly enjoyed reading such a relaxing story with an overall wonderful flow and character design. I have yet to check out any of your earlier work but you certainly have my interest, I look forward to seeing this story develop. You are a good writer with an eye for tempo and writing rhythm which results in quality work with a very fluent storyline; well done, I applaud you. I hope you keep writing and pamper us with chapters. Have fun!

6yr
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