Overall, I like the story and where it's heading. Though, I am biased since this is the sort of genre and theme that I am partial to. (*⸰‿-) Writing Quality: Not perfect, but good enough not to distract me from reading it. English isn't my first language, thus the grammatical errors and punctuation mistakes do not bother me too much. Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith. Story Development: I like how the author is able to portray the past and the present, plus what is unfolding. The only thing I am perhaps sad about is that FL doesn't seem to be able to resolve her own grevience since she transmigrated to another world? Future? Character Design & World Background: Strong FL, cheeky ML. Always a good combination. Author manages to flesh them out nicely. A good novel with lots of potential. Added to library. All the best Author!
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