Review Detail of LordOfTheElementz in Zzz Dropped

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Rating: 5

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LordOfTheElementzLv25yrLordOfTheElementz

Interesting Start. i personally like how the story is going. i recommend the author to have a better grammar. I think this story have potential

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Gwhdhfbehwja

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GwhdhfbehwjaAuthorGwhdhfbehwja

Thank you for your review. My english is bad because english is not my mother language

5yr

WMLazyDayDreamLv5WMLazyDayDream

Use Microsoft Word spell/grammar check English (UK) as a reference but the idea and work count aren't bad. If you can find someone on the site that has the time and doesn't mind being your beta to check before you post.

Gwhdhfbehwja:Thank you for your review. My english is bad because english is not my mother language

5yr