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Review Detail of Adam in Golden Fox with System

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Adam
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The premise? Great. The system? Interesting The power growth? Engaging The harem? So poorly done it detracts from everything else. A new character was introduced, and within a day of him knowing her, he tells her pretty much every single secret he has, for no reason other than harem. He spends more time increasing the power of his harem than he does increasing his own. Personally I'm a massive fan of a harem novel. I just can't stand when characters are forcefully inserted in the story, with no background or development and from day 1 are given 100% trust by MC. I want organic growth and interaction between the MC and any other intellectual life form, to be the same for a harem member as any other character, these ones just happen to be female, and he ends up liking them more. I don't want to be 100% sure she harem member, because of how she was inserted in a single chapter, and is basically already in. I want interaction, the same level of trust he would give a stranger, because that's what they are, strangers.

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Golden Fox with System

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MD_Arafat_Alam
MD_Arafat_AlamLv4MD_Arafat_Alam

is romance that bad here??? i am a big fan of action+romance novel....... if it’s poorly done then i am out.... so could you plz tell me how is romance here i mean in this novel???

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

think of it as rushed fluff...pretty much what the guy above says. **: do you have any recommendations ....ur choice of novels is similar to mine. just no ntr/netori or yaoi. if u have any, do tell... it would be appreciated

MD_Arafat_Alam:is romance that bad here??? i am a big fan of action+romance novel....... if it’s poorly done then i am out.... so could you plz tell me how is romance here i mean in this novel???
MD_Arafat_Alam
MD_Arafat_AlamLv4MD_Arafat_Alam

i do have some..... but first try 1.You cannot afford to offend my women.... well,the mc here is too op... i litarily mean too op... and two harem member but good romance + good comedy.... main action or should i say main story start after 250-300 chapter...... before that normal action,,,,romance/character development and comedy..... just try first 20 chapter 👍👍👍 then i will give you some more🙃 you will love it(maybe just try this one)

amaturewriter:think of it as rushed fluff...pretty much what the guy above says. **: do you have any recommendations ....ur choice of novels is similar to mine. just no ntr/netori or yaoi. if u have any, do tell... it would be appreciated
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

I shall. thx

MD_Arafat_Alam:i do have some..... but first try 1.You cannot afford to offend my women.... well,the mc here is too op... i litarily mean too op... and two harem member but good romance + good comedy.... main action or should i say main story start after 250-300 chapter...... before that normal action,,,,romance/character development and comedy..... just try first 20 chapter 👍👍👍 then i will give you some more🙃 you will love it(maybe just try this one)