I like the overall story. I like the streaming tough not the commentary as its pronounced in comparison to the chapter size. The girly look for a guy is somewhat off-putting. Especially since it plays such a big role to the story. The guy is basically a trap using himself as bait in the apocalypse to manipulate people... I like the overall manipulation stuff and I don't actually mind the trap. What I mind is that I don't relate to the character as a result of it which reduces my immersion into the story. Theres not going to be any actual smut as far as I can see from this point in time but with the mcs weird fetish if there is some itl probably be straight and not another ****ty apocalypse slash fic. I think it would be cool if he could get points for view count. Like 100 points for every benchmark of new viewers and continues view count per week or something... Anyway the streamer power could be a expended upon... Hell maybe even allow the viewers to donate or something. Technically the story is well written, grammar is fine and plot engaging despite the broken powers
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