Review Detail of David_Drake in Why can't I delete books

This is a really good sci-fi fic. It has a realistic MC who is trying to get some stability in his life from far away from his home. For me this is more like a fantasy fic though as the author doesn't get into the techno aspects of an alien culture and focuses more on the mystery of the MC and his saiyan powers. The romance done in this story is written way better than most, however, I do find a few things I dislike. A few being: how the MCs powers work, his constant monologues slowing down the pacing, the ghost girls unnecessary/constant remarks and the unending bad luck that the author is obsessed with implementing. Even though these things do stand out, I find them more of a personal preference than a real issue with his writing. The story does remain fairly consistent and doesn't break immersion when a few characters get a bit annoying.