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Kurome_Chan
Kurome_ChanLv45yr
2019-04-11 09:19

I'm not a mecha maniac. The author was the same author that made fate fanfic ( i don't remember the title). Writing quality improved 👌 It's a good thing. But the stability update ? It become worse, the author usually update 1 chapter each day. Now it just 2/3 chapters each week. Author, you should give more information about what you're writing. I mean, "what's ahab reactors, gn particles, psycho frame?" Something i can eat? Not everyone that reading your story understand about that,but don't you dare give us a full chapter with info dump! You should improve your stability update.

G-Project Ultima Rex

Ranzoku
4.5
19 Chs

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Schnee_
Schnee_Lv5

Ahab reactors from GUNDAM iron Blooded Orphans = the cable link they're using when they use mobile suit GN Particles are from GUNDAM 00 = the one that disrupt communication Phyco Frame fron GUNDAM Unicorn = the transforming unicorn gundam

5yr
Schnee_
Schnee_Lv5

im a huge fun of GUNDAM

5yr
Kurome_Chan
Kurome_ChanLv4

Okay, thanks for the explanation. But, that's not the point. I wrote this, because the author doesn't explain on his chapter. I just point out, the missing thing that he needs to improve.

Schnee_:Ahab reactors from GUNDAM iron Blooded Orphans = the cable link they're using when they use mobile suit GN Particles are from GUNDAM 00 = the one that disrupt communication Phyco Frame fron GUNDAM Unicorn = the transforming unicorn gundam
5yr
Schnee_
Schnee_Lv5

ohh ok i think the author thought all his/her readers is a mecha and GUNDAM fun hahaha

Kurome_Chan:Okay, thanks for the explanation. But, that's not the point. I wrote this, because the author doesn't explain on his chapter. I just point out, the missing thing that he needs to improve.
5yr
Kurome_Chan
Kurome_ChanLv4

Hahahaha.. Well, hope in the future he/she'll add a chapter full of explanation

Schnee_:ohh ok i think the author thought all his/her readers is a mecha and GUNDAM fun hahaha
5yr
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Schnee_
Schnee_Lv5

maybe not he is kind of author who want his reader to sesarch and find it hahaha

Kurome_Chan:Hahahaha.. Well, hope in the future he/she'll add a chapter full of explanation
5yr
Kurome_Chan
Kurome_ChanLv4

That's really not nice of him..

Schnee_:maybe not he is kind of author who want his reader to sesarch and find it hahaha
5yr
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GreenDragonEmperor
GreenDragonEmperorLv14

Stable updates, good story development, good character design and excelent world background, one of my favorite so far! More chapter plz...plz...plz

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DaoistSleepyHead
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Nice creating a gundam fan fic where you combined seed and Buiild Diver/Fighter..... though the MC's personality is like a two face but damn still a good work......

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Matt_Shoots
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Reveal spoiler

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Israfil
IsrafilLv14

the updates is still not stable enough, sorry i only can give this much. the other category is already perfect, i'll change this rating after the updates is stable enough.

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DDax
DDaxLv5

Reveal spoiler

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Shirohime
ShirohimeLv3

The very first Gundam fanfic here...... It's good..... Good...good... 😆😆

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Lord_Mordred
Lord_MordredLv4

I like the story, but waiting is not my virtue. Well, basically I'm just write this review to get more exp. Lol more update please!!

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IssyxX
IssyxXLv4

Keep up with the awesome story CD love how the mc doesn't let other people threaten him and push him around and pair him with lacus pls xD I'll love the story even more and hope you update more soon

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GreenDragonEmperor
GreenDragonEmperorLv14

Good translation quality, stable updates, good story development, good character design and excelent world background, one of my favorite so far!

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